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City of London School 11+ Creative Writing PracticeGet detailed feedback on a practice writing piece.

City of London School’s published 11+ format includes a 30-minute short-story task based on a prompt, usually handwritten. Submit a completed practice piece for detailed general writing feedback.

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About this feedback: QuillSquare provides detailed feedback on general writing skills relevant to entrance-exam preparation. It does not use City of London School's marking criteria or predict how City of London School would score a response.

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Detailed feedback, including:
  • Addressing the task
  • Structure and organisation
  • Vocabulary
  • Sentence construction
  • Punctuation
  • Grammar and technical accuracy
  • Effectiveness of writing choices

A practice piece.
A clearer next step.

Why practise written English?

Longer written responses need different skills from multiple-choice questions. Practising real writing and getting constructive feedback can help identify what to work on next.

Develop your own ideas

The school’s published guidance highlights creativity, vocabulary and accuracy, and cautions against memorised phrases and imagery. Try unfamiliar prompts and develop your own story rather than learning model passages.

Published admissions guidance

How it works

  1. Set a practice task.
  2. Upload the handwritten response.
  3. Receive detailed general writing feedback and next steps.
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From practice to a plan

Constructive, structured feedback

Understand what is working well and what to focus on next, with clear feedback across key writing skills.

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City of London School 11+ offer

Ready to try a practice piece for City of London School 11+?

Use detailed general writing feedback to identify strengths and decide what to practise next.

50% off during our City of London School 11+ offer. Use code CITY50 at checkout.

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